2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(33):学生使用手机

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Dear Editor, I'm a senior high student. Now many students is using mobile. someone think it's cool and the others think it's convenience to contact family and friends by it. I always hear the voice of mobile in class because some students get it into class. It's break the class discipline. Someone send message in the class, it's waste the good time. I suggest that we must keep the class quiet. Because the class room is the place we study here. we all pay our attention to the study. Students must get the mobile into the class room.