2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowadays, employment faces a serious situation: education pays in higher earnings andlower unemployment rates. So more and more greduators get into trouble with employment. The record of Education pays in 2011 showed that the higher degree has more pay and lower unemployment rate, on the contrary, the lower degree has lower pay and higher unemployment rate.