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要求:
1.列出大家熟悉的反映家乡变化的喜事,如购新车、住新房、学生免费接受义务教育等
2.列出国内最近发生的一两件大事, 如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号”顺利升空等3. 注意时态
参考词汇
义务教育：compulsory education举办: host 顺利地：smoothly
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨。
The recent years have witnessed the emergence of a widespread social phenomenon.That is,a growing number of Chinese people choose to spend their holidays abroad.Accordingly,where to go,without the slightest question,has become a hot topic in public.As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to spend my holiday in America. It is of no difficulty for us to put forward some arguments to illustrate my choice.At the top of the list,it is with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards that more and more Chinese families can afford their touring in America.Banking on a recent Internet survey,approximately 55% of the families of big cities have such financial resources.Furthermore,we must admit that America is the most developed country in the world,where you can enjoy first-rate services and comforts.Finally,the fact cannot be ignored that by travelling in America,folks will have the chance to communicate with the local people,hence improving their English skills. There is no denying the fact that people may have diverse opinions on the same issue nevertheless,my standpoint is clear and well-founded in the foregoing arguments.Therefore,I believe,Aemrica is my correct choice.
