2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(33):学生使用手机

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Dear editor, I‘m a senior high student.There has a phenomenon that many students use telephone mobile are draw by our attention. They consider that it is a fashion trade we have to follow up ,even it can contact our parents timely and convince to keep in touch with our friends.But we can not ignore that it takes many problems to us.Some students now still plays mobile in class,such as playing game ,sending message,watching fiction. With the rolling start, not only dose they destroy the rules, but also influence the others' studying.In other words,they have waste a lot of precious time,and can not fix up. So I want to give some advises to many students. The classroom is the place that we only use for our study,it need everyone be quite to learn or read books.Without the disrupt of mobile,especially in class,can we concentrate on learning the knowledge.I hope that every students could comply with the rules,and spare no effort to create a well atmosphere of study. Yours sincerely, Wang li