Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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nowadays,people who have higher education has the higher weekly earnings and enjoy the lower unemployment.we could see the importance of education under such circumstance. to some extent, this is not fair,for many areas in our country could not pay for the education fee.many of the student drop school and become a priest in the whole life.