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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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i am engineer,now I has one child ,he is a boy ,he is very smart and strong. I like he very much.he study in hua yan school and near my hom. The National Day is coming ,We have a long time to play and study by ourself.Travel is a good way to refresh and broaden our horizon. During your travel, you can turn off your cellphone and keep far from the Internet. You can forget your work, your study or your family, and just enjoy the leisure time. From the moment when you start your journey, all the trifles should be locked at your house. During the travel, you can kill your time slowly to have a good rest, and you can contact with different people. They may be a window for you to know a different world. Meet various people, experience things, which make your world bigger. You just clean up your entire mind and you can get the true meaning of trave
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