3.参考词汇 :集中(注意力) concentrate on
错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
And my name is WANG LI. Nowadays,many students think that using mobile phone not just a trendy action but also a convient way to contact with their families and friends. Some of the pupils bring their cellphones to school and I can usually hear from the ring tones from them and it is really confusing and it can disturb another students either . No more than that, some of them are wasting the precious time due to texting messages. As a student, I consider classroom belongs to us and we should not use our cellphones during the class and we need a silent place .So students should not use their cellphones in class so that they can recieve a good result on their studies.They should concentrate on their studies and respect their teachers . It is definitely a silly behavior if you want to give up your study result.