高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown, situated in the north of China, is a small populated town. it was a beautiful village with a great many trees around it and fish swimming in the clean river and simple houses besides the narrow streets. people led a poor but simple life in the past. with the development of economy, the town takes on a different image. you can see high buildings standing everywhere and automobiles hurtling on the streets. however, the environment is degenerated, the number of trees falling, fish disappearing. you seldom can see the idyllic scene of the birds singing in the trees and rising sun glittering on the green field at dawn. it is time for us to deal with the pollution. no one or no country can afford the price of polluting the surroundings for the sake of economic development.