2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；连词使用偏少。

As you can see, this picture shows that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. The unemployment rate always slow down in 2011as degree get up , but the median weekly earning are get up in 2011. In addition, everyone's education will decline. So, I feel that we should encourage studying and master knowledge. In a word, we should conside job in the future.