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Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country. It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers. And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging. There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon. In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it. The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging. In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.
