英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 考研英语> 真题> 考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3133
要求:

作文要求:

写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

字数要求:

300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分50.0分
评语:

句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意词汇量的增加,文章中拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

The creative is a important character of head and the computer adopt much knowlege from people. When we have some solutions which need sovle.If we work for the problem by ourself,we must use our head to think about the ways that can heip us work for the problem.Sometimes it could be hard,and waste a lot of time.In the meanwhile,if we use the computer to sovle the problem,we can easliy get the help that can work for the problem we meet.Beacause,the computer has much konwlege that we can get,when we has something that is difficult to work for. And I think that the knowlege of computer is made of much thinking of head.So we can use the computer to improve our thinking,meanwhile,we can also use the knowlege we have to inhance the computer.

会员评论0个评论)
shenmdgh
金币:5

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:89.0yutao2011

人气:71发布:2013-08-28

得分:86.5wooddi

人气:62发布:2014-07-12

得分:84.5liuking716

人气:29发布:2016-11-16

得分:83.0范隆秀

人气:58发布:2013-09-29

得分:83.0魔亭易

人气:46发布:2016-10-09