2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

As we know ,a strong will is the key of success and it is wisdom to regard a strong will as tool to achieve our dream . The famous writer ,Zhang Haidi ,she can't walk like a common people because her serious disease . However ,she become a special writer with her strong will . In other hand ,a strong will also is a essential factor for make a great mission .A great man who make contribute to humans is always have a strong will . For instant , Mao Zedong ,our leader who united chinese to fight for freedom .And at last ,he finished the difficult mission . Not only the successful person should have a strong will ,but a student who live in nowadays .Our society is developing , everyone intends to be more knowledgeable. A student become usefully unless he should study hard .