作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Certificate Craze Now more and more college students are keen on a great variety of certificate tests。For example, there are CET-4 and CET-6, Computer grade II certificate test, psychological consultant test, driving license test, and so on. They are engaging in all kinds of coaching classes to get across it. Their aims in it are different from each other. Firstly, some of them want to increase their knowledge and experience to enrich their university life. They are crazy about getting the higher ability, though in some unpopular things. The second, most of them are going to accumulate the capitals of employment because of the increasing pressure of the employment. So it is important for them to get through all kinds of certificate tests. My point is not to deliberately pursue those certification tests, but try to learn some of their favorite subjects. We didn't have to crazy about all kinds of certificate tests, just think it relaxed.