2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the development of the technical and scince,computer is widely used by human,they use it for searching knowledge or news.but every coin has two sides,for example,many student use it to play games.people can use computer buy something needed on surfing,so it make people more lazier but convenice.the develop of computer is fast.