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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6297
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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可适当增加学术词汇的使用量;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;应增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意部分有错误的句子。

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When I was young,I was told to be honest,My grandma usually let me learn this by stories,she said only be honest did anyone else would trust you,But I could not understand at that time.Some years later,I have grown up,and I know how important my grandma had told me. Nowadays, economy is developing very fast,more and more people would make a little more money and do something which let their friend,family do not believe them any more.Maybe before they did this they can't image what they would influence others and themselves .But after,they could know how important for trust between people.people could do nothing without trust,because nobody believe you,besides your friends,companies,your boss.You could not get chance to prove yourself too.Absolutely,trust for a company is also important,If a company is unhonest,it is impossible for it to cooperate with other companies.So in this social,we also need trust. I hope every one could maintain trust,and it is benifit for us,If you attemp to find a job, this is first lesson you should learn.In a world,we should be honest in every time,everyday

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