2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

Nowadays online shopping have became a kind of fashion , which have many advantages to our life ,for example ,it supplied more convenient for consumers,and it gave consumers many choice when they was shopping . Online shopping also have some disadvantages to our life ,firstly,it likely to cheat us ,when we wanted to bought something ,beacuse sometimes the product might not conformed with the picture .secondly ,it is so long to waited for the goods reached us ,beacuse the manufacture deliveryed the goods is too slow . In my opinion , I think that we should used the reasonable attitude to treated online shoping .