考研作文：关于领导

作者词汇基础扎实；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

To whom it may concern, I am writing this letter to express my opinion in terms of the current policy in the Golden Week holiday.As you might know,some believe it is a good idea to enjoy a week-long break.For one thing,it provides sufficient time for folks to refresh their minds and thus to have better preparations for their future work.For another,it will lead to increased tourism and in turn stimulate the development of the local economy. Truly,the past decade has witnessed many advantages of the Golden Week holiday nevertheless,we should never ignore its disadvantages.On the one hand,it may lead to heavy traffic in than a large number of tourists go on traveling during the same period.On the other hand,some tourists,with no awareness of environmental protection,ofter drop little at random so that scenic spots are polluted and thus it demands a tremendous sum of money to eliminate the pollution. Given that the current grim situation,it is necessary that the authorities concerned should take immediate measures to eliminate these disadvantages.Only through these efforts can we relieve the traffic pressure and can we raise people's awareness of environmental protection at the same time.