2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we all known,computer become more and more important in our daily life. It's as a important roles in our daily work .for instance ,investment,shopping,change fees of electric,chattingand so on.since having computer,many things which we used to think mix and difficult become easy and simple.We can use computer combine man's practice to complete a set of uninvaluable works. however,every thing has it's failth whatever how it perfect.With the develepment of socielty ,computer was widelly use ,lots of people addicted to surf on line ,computer games, expecially the teenager.It's lead to bad influence for youngers.because,they often not study hard and cut class by themselies to playing games. In my opinion,we should make good use of computer by right leading and make a correct understanding of computer.