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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com Date:May.26. 2013 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear: sir or mandon During held exhibition in New York on the date of Dec. 15 to 22.that i known your company new production No.5670. I am very interested in the new production. Your company send us a price list and instruction.Thanks for your co-operation and we can establish business relationship . yours sincerely hubin
