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Nowadays,you can hear different dialects while sitting in a park.Why?Because people are just moving around to earn their livings.While they are moving,they move with the dialects with them.And new generation is more willing to accept the dialects speaking in public places. Like we always know,when we are sitting in a park,we are going to hear different dialects from the seniors.