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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分48.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Nowadays,you can hear different dialects while sitting in a park.Why?Because people are just moving around to earn their livings.While they are moving,they move with the dialects with them.And new generation is more willing to accept the dialects speaking in public places. Like we always know,when we are sitting in a park,we are going to hear different dialects from the seniors.

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