2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we all know,computer become more and more important in our daily life. It is as an important roles in our daily work .for instance ,investment,shopping,change fees of electric,chatting and so on.Since having computer,many things which we used to think mix and difficult become easy and simple.We can use computer combine man's practice to complete a set of unavilable works. However,every thing has it's fault, whatever how perfect it is.With the develepment of society ,computer was widelly use ,lots of people addicted to surf on line ,computer games, especially the teenager.It's lead to bad influence for youngers.because,they often not study hard and cut class by themselves to playing games. In my opinion,we should make good use of computer by right leading and make a correct understanding of computer.