2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加学术词汇的使用量；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we all know,computer become more and more important in our daily life. It is as an important role in our daily work .for instance ,investment,shopping,change fees of electric,chatting and so on.Since having computer,many things which we used to think mix and difficult become easy and simple.We can use computer combine man's practice to complete a set of unavilable works. However,every thing has its fault, whatever how perfect it is.With the development of society,computer was widelly use,lots of people addicted to on line surf ,computer games, especially the teenager.It's lead to bad influence for youngers.Because,they frequently not study hard and cut class by themselves to playing games. In my opinion,we should make good use of computer by right leading and make a correct understanding of computer.