2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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you can find that someone stay at home day and night but he could buy what he want to buy.It is strange?That's no.With the computer technology development,people can know everything stay at home.Of course people can buywhat he like.That is to said,Online shopping become a fasion.people tend to shopping online .But