拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese Nowadays, students often choose the other small languages when they select major before entering schools. More and more schools pays attention to other languages like Spanish and Japanese. And when students learn English major, colleges would ask students to learn another language instead of Chinese. Actually , learning Chinese well is very important to entire life and career . Most people think their Chinese is good so that they needn’t learn Chinese anymore. They learn more other languages ,in order to find job after graduation . As a result, this phenomenon causes the lacking in knowledge of Chinese culture and logistic of talking. When they talk with others ,they can’t speak logistic words . Meantime,they can’t write fluent essay. As far as i’m concerned,Chinese is fundamental to learn and talk . Everyone should pay attention to studying Chinese . After learning Chinese ,they can strengthen their integrated skills.