Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
This week,we stated the new study life in university.All of us were very excited.Each class were taught in English.The teachers spoke English so fluently.I hoped that I can speak English very fluenty with one or two years' practice.We knew many different teachers.All of them were easy-going and friendly to us.And we met our foreign teacher.She was so white and beautiful.In the class,we asked her many questions and she said she loved China.