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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
Money's handling of student In my personal opinion, I certainly believe that students should be very careful with their money. There are some reasons to support my opinion which are concluded by my study daily life experience. First, most of our money is from our parents' sweat, so when we cost our money we should take parents' feeling into consideration and we should never cost our money optionally. Second, we are student, we should save much money in our study's cost, for example, we can save money to buy some study instruments,such as electronic dictionary, computer and so on. Third and most importantly,as students,we should learn how to refuse to enjoin entertainment in substance, instead, we should learn how to experience hardship. In a word, as students we should be careful with our money's cost in all aspects of our daily life. I also want to say enjoyment is not good for our students'growth,but hardship can enhance students' life power so that we can become more brave to face anything in our future life.
