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On Low Carbon Living In the recently years, people advocate the concept that on low carbon living. It is reduce the carbon emission when shopping and supermarket or travel not by the private car but by the bus. Save energy or protect environment is on low carbon living. It is of utmost significance that on low carbon living. For one thing, it is not only reduce carbon emission but also save energy. For another, the on low carbon living bring the green environment and is benefit of person health. The last but most important is cut carbon emission is relationship with global climate. As a matter of fact, save energy is on low carbon living. As the students of college and universities, everyone in the society contributes some effect to the important of environment. We are use the low-energy light bulbs and close the stopcock when we are in home.
