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I have a good friend.We were born in the same year,and in fact today,right now,we are always living together. He is interested in playing computer games,with many special skills,it makes him be the focus of us.It takes us so much time to play computer game,we find our eyesight get bad day by day. In order to prevent it became worse,we decide to decrease our time that we used to play games on computer.On the other hand,there are many outdoor sports that wait for us,we are enjoyed in all of them. Thanks for having you there, my best friend,and may you be happy!