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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36991
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend.We were born in the same year,and in fact today,right now,we are always living together. He is interested in playing computer games,with many special skills,it makes him be the focus of us.It takes us so much time to play computer game,we find our eyesight get bad day by day. In order to prevent it became worse,we decide to decrease our time that we used to play games on computer.On the other hand,there are many outdoor sports that wait for us,we are enjoyed in all of them. Thanks for having you there, my best friend,and may you be happy!

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