Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇基础不错,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
as the picture and the dialogue convey, we can definitely draw a clear conclusion that future carrer is heavily depending on the education you have received. from the picture,we can read the hints from it.high employment ratio and high incomes in the degree of doctor show that higher educatiion do play an increasing important role in you future development.believe it or not , we should admit the truth that the knowledge is money.for the students who are still at school,the knowledge they are learning may seems to be useless,especially for the art students.however,the knowledge is always powerful,and it's just a matter of time . many students drop out from school when they were still in their teen age.they all have difficulties in school learning and are unable to be admitted by some university.therefore, they choose to leave their hometown to find a job in the coastal cities for higher income and improve their living standard.and also,there are still many people who start their own business in sopport of their parents.for them, escaping from school maybe a good choice, but they haven't realized the side effect of droping out from school.they don't receive enough education,so they just can tackle some foundamental work.when it comes to the professional field,they have no idea on how to deal with the items.they get lower wage comparing with advanced learner,especially the PHD. for the students who are receiving advanced education,education do have a deep impact on them.not only can education bring a variety of knowledge to them,but also education can change you way of thinking,enlighten you horizon and broaden your mind.through learning,man can truly know who he is and look into the ego and find