题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
On maintaining trust In our modern society,the increasing of treating makes us untrusting others.But in order to have a harmony society,as the essential tools for communicating with people, trusting others is indispensable. First,keeping on maintaining trust we can have a relaxing atmosphere to talk with people.We could express our feelings with every one in our life,which makes our life more easier.Second,as we trusting others we also win the trusting from them.We will have a good time with them.Last but no least,it is vitally for us to chat with others in nowadays.Mainaining trust is a key to the door of communication. All in all,please remenber that trusting others then they will trusting you.