回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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June 4th, 2010 Dear Wang: Thanks for your visiting to join your son's birthday.Your son very lovely and I really want to look him . I quit sorry that I must to deal with many very important business works go to country in recently.So I can't to go,express my deep sorry. yours, Simith