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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2689
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;熟练使用了一些长难句;拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加。

用户练习作文:

With the proliferation of media, news has been sending to the very corner of the world. Some people think that there is no point to watching or reading new because it is unrelative to our daily life, while some others claim that it is good to know what is going on around us. In my opinion, I believe that new is one of important parts of our life and no one can live without it. Certainly, it seems that most of the news is not happening right next to us, for example, election in American has nothing to do with the people who are living in other countries. However, keeping us been updated is not only about knowing what is happening but also helps us to understand life better. First of all, it is always good for been updated nowadays. Obviously, human's life is changing faster than before. As we all know, it took many years from first computer has been produced till computers came into household, nonetheless, it took less than three years from Iphone 4 to Iphone 5. Moreover, it is necessary to connect to the rest part of the world. Surely, as the very basic element of this big world, everything we do would impact our future and our decendents, such as greenhouse, new green energy, nuclear weapon, only when we know what is happening, then we would be able to plan a better future. Last but not least, in the daily level, we could not live without news, from traffic jam to a new legislation applied to a new shopping mall opened, news is becoming an elementary part of people's life. In conclusion, no one could really live without keep in touch with rest of the world, isolating ourselves only would lead us to a dark future.

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