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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Juding from this chart,we can see that high education benefits seeking a good job.It also reflects higher pay is closely related with high education. It's easier for them to find a good job than people who got low education.Of course,they also earn much money than that. However,I don't think so.Although you own a high education,the boss pay you salary according to your ability instead of the certificate.As we known,some people made illegal certificates in order to earn more money.si it results that there are plenty of certificates are not genuine in the market.Therefore, a certificate can not certify a person's capacity. In my opinion,"Every coin has two sides." We are living in a competive society which needs more and more elites t.It was obvious that they need high education people to contribute the country.So should we keep up with the socity,and study continuely.That is to say,high education will lead to us living more comfortable.

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