2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

With the change of life ,shopping online has being a fashion.Although it dose the job quite efficiently,its side effects are also enormous. To begin with ,we cannot check what we buy online ,therefore ,we cannot sure the quility of it .At the same time ,it is difficult to people to chose the imformation online ,which insists so many imformations and even some of then are not true.In addition,the most undesirable effect is that online shopping will provide a stage for the people who have some bad ideas ,they spread some bad imformations ,which will make an bad influence on the child growing. From my point of view ,people should be more causious whlie shopping onlie