2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误。

With the development of world,many family only have one child,so many parents excessive protect their children to do their kids who want to do and they care of more their children than themselves.Whereas, as parents should let their children know how was the world that they live in. We know that every coin has two sides,if we always depend on our parents we perhaps can't do anything unless they still company us.and one day we will stay away them.so we must set the realize that we must learn how to independent without our parents.and independence is very essentials to children. So in order to let kids independent parents must take measures to help their kids.such as they can make they go home alone after school or let them make decisions about themselves and so on.