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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Internet is convenient in the world today. When i chat with my classmates and friends,i always ask them,"What do you usually do on Internet and how often do you surf the Internet? How long?"I usually listen to music,chat,see some movies,search, and download something. Some people say,'you are not ncessary to travel the world if you have a computer' because you can research on line if you want to know. LuYU,as a famous host,she doesn't know anything about computer.But she has a Bvital brain and beauty words.So,as for me,I don't think Internet is whole life. Internet,we have to say it can help us to imporve our work and study effecient.However,some people use Internet to get unuseful,unhealthy imformations.It's terriable. Personally,we should learn knowledge about internet,but we should not get unhealthy imformations on line.We should do the meaningful thing.
