2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the rapid development of computerization,the majority of people are worried about their jobs displaced by computer. Why they will think that? It is just because computer possesses more flexibility or human became more and more rely on computer,and they can't live without it. In our daily life,we spend our time on computer always exceed several hours,something we always depend on computer instead of ourselves. All in all,if we,our man can make a suitable utility on computer,we will not concern about that.