2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we all know,computer is extremely essential for people. Nonetheless just as a said "every coin has tow sides".on the other hand ,some person think that computer horizon us broaden without out.secondly,we can foreknow some skills.Thirdly,we can make some friends with a variety of people.We can have a lot of fun. On the other hand, a great many people insist that competer is awful to us,especially to children.one compelling argument involves that many children activated to computer games very years.besides,a lot of people was dazzled by boring news and notarizing articles in computer. As for me,there is truth in both arguments.therefore,i'm concerned,i agree the fomer opinion.we cannot leave computer,we knew that.But for the sake of us,we need mius time in face to computer.