北京西城区2012届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文

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Dear Tony, I think that is serious.As a middle scool student,finishing our homework is our duty.The student who in your group is lazy and dishonest.but YOU can help him know that he's worried.And you can do these below.The first,you should ask him that why he dosen't finish his homework.The second,you can let him realise that finishing his homework is important for him.Finally,you should encourage him to finish his homework on time.I think you should give him a chance again. Good luck! Yours, Marry