Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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I wronged him by saying he had lied.An environmentalist campaigning for the protection ofendangered sea turtles in Costa Rica has been founddead on a beach on the country’s Caribbean coast. Theowner of a turtle sanctuary, where 24-year-old JairoMora worked, told the BBC that he’d been kidnapped andkilled by four masked men while on a night patrol. Seaturtles are protected in Costa Rica, but poachers canmake hundreds of dollars collecting and smuggling theireggs.