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北京门头沟区2013届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文:保护环境

发布时间:2013-05-15 18:14浏览次数:1124
要求:
根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文,所给英文提示词语供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
你们学校《英语周报》正在开展“保护环境从我做起”的征文活动。请写一篇介绍自己如何从小事做起保护环境的短文。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语: protect, instead, recycled, duty, environment, simplest, activities, suggest , become
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

How Can We Protect The Environment In our life,the simplest activities are able to influence the environment.For example,now-days there are more and more private cars in the big city,that bring the traffic problem. So,how can we do something of protecting the environment? Firstly,protecting the water from being polluted.When you brush your teeth,you shouldn't turn on the tap all the time.And you can use the water to wash fruits,then reuse it to clean the floor. The second,saving the energy of electricity.You must turn off the lights when you go out.And you shouldn't switch on two or more electrical appliances at the same time. The third,don't throw away the things which can be repaired.You should consider if you should throw them away.If you need to buy a new one certainly,you should also sort them before you throw them away. If everyone realised the importance of protecting the environment,I believe the environ-ment will be more and more well.

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