邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety recently,many school volent affairs have taken place in China.So something necessary should be take to deal with it . First,the school should educate students to obey the rules.second,students should be taught to prevent themselves from being injuried.The most important is that they should get along well with their classmates. We all should try our best to solve this probiem because students is the hope of the native.