高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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THE CUSTUMN OF Hello ,happy mid-autumn festival. I want to tell you that the custom of China MID-AUTUMN FESTIVAL.The mid-autumn festival in China has a long history. this is one of the most Traditional Festivals in china. we will has dinner all together with all our family.It shows that we are happy.we will eat the mooncake all family and talk each other.And we will see the moon when is the brightest.that's all.