文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Hey, boys and girls, why do you lose confidence in studying English? You should know that English is very important in your life. When you grow older, you'll have a higher chance to get a better job if you can speak a fluent English. Then, after you realize the importance of English, you should know how to study it well. Firstly, you'd better practice your oral English every morning. In that way, you will find yourself speaking an excellent English. Secondly, you can listen to English songs or watch American films so that you will have a better understanding of English history. Finally, it's good for you to talk to others in English. You must be aware of that nothing is difficult if you put your heart in it. Don't lose your heart!