2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

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As a couple of pictures show,there are different consequences for same flower in symmetric cricumstances.In the frist picture stands a flower protecting by warmhouse which is thriving although there is ranning outside.By the contrary, without the protecting of the shelter, the flower is stepping to the death which is casused by the wind and rain.the caption under the pictures demonstrate the flowers growing in the warmhouse can withstand rain showering and wind blowing. The pictures convey a deep concern that the children whose growth is not accompanied with frastration can shoulder the duties of consruting our country.A properous country is reined by one who can conqur any challege no matter what he confront.However, so deeply do parents love their children that they can tolerent their babies subject to any danger without considering how much love they pay is how weak the children will be To avoid such consequence appearing, there are some advices deserving the parents who expect their children growing in the right trace to adopt .The parents should release somewhat tense nerve to give more chance for children to encounter challege.They also need to be educated that sometime a slight harm constitute a kind of protection.