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Dears edsitors: HI! I am LIHONG. Nowadays I have some troubles and I don't know how to do, so I writing a letter to you and I hope you can give me some advice and hope you can help me,thank you very much,with much appreciate. I am an excellent basketball athlete all the time,so my train think I get the chance to became a Ball-game star.But in my parent's opinion:they think my study mask is in the middle level,and think that I should spend much time in develope my stduy mask so that I can go into a good campus. Because of the Training or competition,I has less and less time to study so I have no time to stuy,and my parents are very angry,and they don't allow me to take part in Training or competition.I am fond of palying basketball and I hope I can get more exercises and became a a Ball-game star one day. I hope you can help me. With much apperciate,thank you very much! Best regards Yours sincerally LI HONG
