2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

We can see that there are many luxury and beautiful commodity on shop. They have different packaging and product but but they are as gorgeous as .It is to say there is the phenomenon of excessive packaging of many goods,at present. How could you do this?I gueess there has some reasons.At first more gorgeous goods more attract customer .Maybe they belive gorgeous equir useful.they is an old saying you will get what you pay for.So the seller use beautiful and gorgeous packing just to attact people to buy .Second it shows people's rank .More gorgeous packing more shows one's status and style.So there are commodity excessive packing. But i don't agree it. Because a uesful goods don't need packing .A good thing don't need packing forver.