山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

I am a student who is learning in your school . I come from China . I like the Enlish very much . SO I study in your school .Now ,I have some troubles about learning .I hope that you can help me . The grammar about English is too hard . IF you are convinient . I hope you can go to the libraay on weekend .