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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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People nowadays are facing a copious amount of choice everyday, which brand of milk should I buy or should I make investment in the stock market. Some people prefer to make the decision after careful consideration, however, others rely on their intuition. As far as I am concerned, I believe whether to adopt snap judgements depends on different circumstantially. In the first place, sometimes we need careful judgement to think critically. We are live in a world where controversial issues are often simply taken for granted, which demand us to take careful and completely consideration of some problems. Many people are reluctant to take trouble to think wheter the girls and boys should take seperate classes. Recently a high school in Beijing announced that their students from then on takes seperate classes. Many parents support such ridiculous decision withour careful consideration. They are poor thinkers and trust the snap judgements. Is such a scheme guarantee boys and girls free of negative effects? Sadly the decision has been made but the question left unanswered.

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