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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3383
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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文中词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较熟练地使用部分学术词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;从句使用量稍显不足;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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A well-known philosophar once said,"honest is the best policy." It benefits us a lot in our daily life.For instance,hoest makes you win the trust and conducive to the harmony of human relationship with others.Then you will succeed more easily than those dishonest people. To further illastrate the importance of honest.Now let me take some cases for example.A well-renowed person,George Washington, has never lied to his father,for his honest and hard working.He finally received high reputation of people and became a notable leader.I suppose all of us have ever heard a story that a dishonesty man was always telling a lie when he was a little boy.One day he asked for help,however,nobody believes him.As a result ,he died from accident.At that moent,he realized the significance of honest,but it's no use regetting for what he had done. In my opinion,my suggestion is that we should be an honest person no matter when we do.Dishonest is not only harm to our mental heahth,but not good for our success.

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